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Fixed sense issue.

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Mike Wichers
2026-02-20 08:47:42 -05:00
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@@ -413,7 +413,7 @@ def evaluate_chapter_quality(text, chapter_title, genre, model, folder):
1. ENGAGEMENT & TENSION: Does the story grip the reader from the first line? Is there conflict or tension in every scene? 1. ENGAGEMENT & TENSION: Does the story grip the reader from the first line? Is there conflict or tension in every scene?
2. SCENE EXECUTION: Is the middle of the chapter fully fleshed out? Does it avoid "sagging" or summarizing key moments? 2. SCENE EXECUTION: Is the middle of the chapter fully fleshed out? Does it avoid "sagging" or summarizing key moments?
3. VOICE & TONE: Is the narrative voice distinct? Does it match the genre? 3. VOICE & TONE: Is the narrative voice distinct? Does it match the genre?
4. SENSORY IMMERSION: Does the text engage all five senses (smell, sound, touch, etc.)? 4. SENSORY IMMERSION: Does the text use sensory details effectively without being overwhelming?
5. SHOW, DON'T TELL: Are emotions shown through physical reactions and subtext? 5. SHOW, DON'T TELL: Are emotions shown through physical reactions and subtext?
6. CHARACTER AGENCY: Do characters drive the plot through active choices? 6. CHARACTER AGENCY: Do characters drive the plot through active choices?
7. PACING: Does the chapter feel rushed? Does the ending land with impact, or does it cut off too abruptly? 7. PACING: Does the chapter feel rushed? Does the ending land with impact, or does it cut off too abruptly?
@@ -421,7 +421,7 @@ def evaluate_chapter_quality(text, chapter_title, genre, model, folder):
9. DIALOGUE AUTHENTICITY: Do characters sound distinct? Is there subtext? Avoids "on-the-nose" dialogue. 9. DIALOGUE AUTHENTICITY: Do characters sound distinct? Is there subtext? Avoids "on-the-nose" dialogue.
10. PLOT RELEVANCE: Does the chapter advance the plot or character arcs significantly? Avoids filler. 10. PLOT RELEVANCE: Does the chapter advance the plot or character arcs significantly? Avoids filler.
11. STAGING & FLOW: Do characters enter/exit physically? Do paragraphs transition logically (Action -> Reaction)? 11. STAGING & FLOW: Do characters enter/exit physically? Do paragraphs transition logically (Action -> Reaction)?
12. PROSE DYNAMICS: Is there sentence variety? Is the rhythm pleasing? Avoids purple prose and excessive adjectives. 12. PROSE DYNAMICS: Is there sentence variety? Avoids purple prose, adjective stacking, and excessive modification.
13. CLARITY & READABILITY: Is the text easy to follow? Are sentences clear and concise? 13. CLARITY & READABILITY: Is the text easy to follow? Are sentences clear and concise?
SCORING_SCALE: SCORING_SCALE:
@@ -632,12 +632,12 @@ def write_chapter(chap, bp, folder, prev_sum, tracking=None, prev_content=None):
INSTRUCTIONS: INSTRUCTIONS:
- Start with the Chapter Header formatted as Markdown H1 (e.g. '# Chapter X: Title'). Follow the 'Formatting Rules' for the header style. - Start with the Chapter Header formatted as Markdown H1 (e.g. '# Chapter X: Title'). Follow the 'Formatting Rules' for the header style.
- SENSORY ANCHORING: Start scenes by establishing Who, Where, and When immediately, anchored with a sensory detail. - SENSORY ANCHORING: Start scenes by establishing Who, Where, and When immediately.
- DEEP POV: Immerse the reader in the POV character's immediate experience. Filter descriptions through their specific worldview and emotional state. - DEEP POV: Immerse the reader in the POV character's immediate experience. Filter descriptions through their specific worldview and emotional state.
- SHOW, DON'T TELL: Focus on immediate action and internal reaction. Don't summarize feelings; show the physical manifestation of them. - SHOW, DON'T TELL: Focus on immediate action and internal reaction. Don't summarize feelings; show the physical manifestation of them.
- CAUSALITY: Ensure events follow a "Because of X, Y happened" logic, not just "And then X, and then Y". - CAUSALITY: Ensure events follow a "Because of X, Y happened" logic, not just "And then X, and then Y".
- STAGING: When characters enter, describe their entrance. Don't let them just "appear" in dialogue. - STAGING: When characters enter, describe their entrance. Don't let them just "appear" in dialogue.
- SENSORY DETAILS: Use specific, grounding sensory details (smell, touch, sound) rather than generic descriptions. - SENSORY DETAILS: Use specific sensory details sparingly to ground the scene. Avoid stacking adjectives (e.g. "crisp white blouses, sharp legal briefs").
- ACTIVE VOICE: Use active voice. Subject -> Verb -> Object. Avoid "was/were" constructions. - ACTIVE VOICE: Use active voice. Subject -> Verb -> Object. Avoid "was/were" constructions.
- STRONG VERBS: Delete adverbs. Use specific verbs (e.g. "trudged" instead of "walked slowly"). - STRONG VERBS: Delete adverbs. Use specific verbs (e.g. "trudged" instead of "walked slowly").
- NO INFO-DUMPS: Weave backstory into dialogue or action. Do not stop the story to explain history. - NO INFO-DUMPS: Weave backstory into dialogue or action. Do not stop the story to explain history.